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Firecracker

Firecracker Our Founding fathers fought valiantly for our Nation to Have Liberty. So today, we Americans may Rejoice in our victory. No need for yearning for the glory days, our patriotic traditions are passed down as we Rejoice with explosions of red, white, and blue! Our never give up attitude Is celebrated with tribute, All kin are reunited with our flag flying high aces! We cheer with chosen alliances, independence day is hear! Boom! 6/30/2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:56:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2015 1:22:00 PM

Jill, this is a great patriotic poem. but you need to look up "acrostic" under "forms" at the top of this page. It will show you how to do an acrostic poem like the judge asked for!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 6/30/2015 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :) both of my patriotic poems were fun. I'll try again, jill