Eternity

puffy summer clouds float across eternity so high birds can't fly

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2022 4:05:00 AM

Good one. There is the heaven that is made for the birds of the air, and they can only go so high. Man, however, has gone beyond and has sent spaceships with cameras even farther. Sometimes I wonder what the outcome will be. Your visit to my page with congrats was encouraging. Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/13/2021 2:36:00 AM

Hi, you do this form so well. I would like to thank you for your comment on my work, I really appreciate it, sorry I am so long in saying thank you x

L. J. Carber
Date: 2/14/2021 9:43:00 AM

That's ok Mandy-- glad you like it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2021 9:55:00 AM

The "enormity" of it all!!

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/31/2021 10:53:00 AM

I think as a child I thought of eternity being in those lovely clouds....