Dreams Soar

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May 2, 2024

Each line 10 syllables.

When I open my eyes at quiet dawn, I see my dreams soar in the horizon. If my dreams, soft as petals of flower, luminous, scintillating, bright they are, They shine in their captivating bower, my dreams waft me away to distant far! If my dreams flow like a humming river, ridged rough hard pebbles are no barrier, To meet mighty ocean it travels far through steep hills and abundant plains, wander ! Part of our existence - magical dreams, float and cruise like sailboats in the vast sea, shine as rainbow, meandering like streams. I hold them to my heart and set them free.

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Suzette Richards

Date: 5/11/2024 11:47:00 PM

I love the final line: it really brings the point home that we can't hold on to dreams, but the imprint is in our hearts. Love this write, Mala :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/3/2024 8:33:00 AM

Your "Dreams Float" is a wonderful write. We never know where dreams will take us... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Karen Jones

Date: 5/2/2024 6:14:00 PM

This is beautiful and engaging! Enjoyed!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/2/2024 6:20:00 PM

Thanks, Karen. This poem has been written by a mistake. I was trying to write a sonnet for Constance …totally forgot she has a specific theme! Appreciate your kind comment.