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Dogs in Queue

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May.4. 2024

Picture Prompt Poetry Contest

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How happy the dogs are to find a tree. Raising one leg, what fun it is to pee. They look a disciplined crew. All are lined up in a queue. When all are done, a flowing stream you’ll see!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2024 10:04:00 PM

Trying to get a comment thru to you. Love this.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/5/2024 9:40:00 AM

Great humor. Loved your limerick. Best for a win. Blessings.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/4/2024 6:50:00 PM

so much fun, is it a true story ? i guess not photographers are so talented, what a surprise, thanks poet

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/4/2024 4:41:00 PM

now aren't you clever and witty! Liked 'disciplined crew' and your ending was perfect. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 5/4/2024 11:05:00 AM

Cute haha, I can imagine and visualise these dogs in a queue and what to expect following that scenario! You can do any theme and any form so very well sweet valsa. Your use of rhymes here and how youv written this truly stood out for me! I especially loved “ Raising one leg, what fun it is to pee. They look a disciplined crew.” ahha! Thats cute!!! “ When all are done, a flowing stream you’ll see!“ definitely! Hah! Best wishes for the contest! Youve nailed it! Sending always light

Silent One

Date: 5/4/2024 9:54:00 AM

Great limerick Valsa, best of luck in the contest dear poet..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2024 9:31:00 AM

Good one, Valsa! You are always good at limericks! Hugs ~ Kim

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/4/2024 7:27:00 AM

Excellent Limerick about the contentment and delight that canines derive from the ritual of peeing on a tree to indicate their territory. You did an excellent job of capturing the dogs' organic behavior and the amusing thought of them waiting in line to pee.

Tonye George

Date: 5/4/2024 6:24:00 AM

Didn't know they could be this organised, lol. Feel good because some humans can't. Nice one V.