'Dark Dreamy Dream'

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Written, March 23, 2018 (Repost 10/22/20)

Poetry/Alliteration/'Dark Dreamy Dream'
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1297-094-23
All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France

Submitted to the International contest, Alliteration 004 (old poems)
Sponsor, Poet Destroyer, Judged May 14, 2024

Third Place

Image result for sun shining in bedroom window

I was down deep in a dark dreamy dream, wandering a wispy, winding wilderness, where sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence; with roars, rumbles and the rage of riotous birds, in trees unseen and in branches of twisted tapestry. When I heard with heartbreak a heavenly voice, calling in the caliginous, obscure gloomy forest canopy; it was my name and I searched with a narcotic need, I ran wild, rampant and rapacious wailing WAIT. Until, I was worn-out weary and woebegone; I murmured and mumbled- mother, mother . . . then, sun blazed like a bath into my bedroom.

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