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Convo With My Inner Freak

me: "you're the reason i have no freinds, the thing i try to hide, i lock you up inside my head, and keep you inside" jez: "i am you and you must see, the one you truly are, not always who they think, you still shine like a star," me: "i miss the life you took from me, the girl i was, please leave me be." jez: "......" me: "i miss your voice, within my head, come back and stay, don't leave instead" jez: "......" me: "ive lost you now, my heart will fade, you were my heart, a mistake i've made." somthing new for those who commented on all my other poems. ~hides and peeks out~ do you like it?

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Date: 2/11/2014 11:05:00 AM
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Date: 2/2/2012 8:14:00 AM
Very Facinating... and unique...you are VERY Creative... I'll definately be back for more reading...
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Date: 1/27/2012 9:43:00 AM
u r such an amazing and gifted writer. i bow to you....never stop writing
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Date: 1/20/2012 9:15:00 AM
i loves it its amazing i want to steal your brain so i can write poetry like this and after i steal your brain u will turn into a mindless zombie
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:54:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your love of poetry with us Jez. I enjoyed reading your writing today. Love, Carol
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