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Written on May 3, 2024

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From His startling brush, blaze stars, We save them like fireflies in jars, Ours are in photos or memoirs, Played in songs by clever guitars. From His light, flow blessings galore. It’s His sweet grace that I adore. Nought compares to the love that’s ours. Played in songs by clever guitars. By His still, small voice, He assures, He lives in our hearts, mine and yours! Wonders found in God’s reservoirs. Played in songs by clever guitars.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/3/2024 3:23:00 PM

I agree...truly nothing compares to the love that's ours. Your poem is spirit filled and inspirational. Liked the repetitive last line in each verse...those words anchored your poem giving it solidarity. Well done. enjoy your evening hugs & blessings, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2024 12:48:00 PM

Impressive and moving piece that highlights the awe-inspiring wonders of God's creations and bounties, together with the love that He has bestowed upon us. Images of stars, light, blessings, grace, and the presence of God are central to you.