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CH-CH-CH-CH-CH CHANGES

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mjc-2011-12-29-IMG_0801 | Insect art, Beautiful bugs, Butterfly cocoon

(Image courtesy of honeybeesuite.com)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ cocoon hangs empty security traded for the beat of new wings

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/1/2024 5:58:00 PM

The photo is so arresting, Sara... I glanced at it, and I saw a laughing 'Grandpa Pacman!' -- no longer 'yellow with youth.' What say you?! Keep smiling, Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:38:00 AM

you have quite the imagination, Gershon. A grandpa pacman...that is funny...I can sort of see it, but I haven't had my caffeine yet :-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2024 5:37:00 PM

An impressive piece of writing, dear Sara. Your haiku writing expertise is improving in this work of art.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 5:38:00 PM

thank you, kind Sotto, for your complimentary words and for noticing my improvement. Your observations mean a great deal to me. Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Silent One

Date: 5/1/2024 12:54:00 PM

A wonderful haiku..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 5:38:00 PM

thanks, Silent One. Grateful for your words.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2024 9:02:00 AM

Ahh!!! Amazing work you have penned. Thanks for sharing this creation with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 5:37:00 PM

thanks Sara K for your positive words & your visit...have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara B

Deb M

Date: 5/1/2024 12:12:00 AM

Just beautiful Sara ….Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 4:11:00 AM

awww, thank you sweet Deb. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/30/2024 7:55:00 PM

Excellent write! yes, we can’t hide away…we must experience life out there and show off the beauty of our wings! Blessings, dear one! ~ Kim

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 4:11:00 AM

Thanks for your kind and complimentary words, Kim. I agree...hiding inside our cocoons isn't why we're here! Appreciate your insights. Like your new photo, BTW. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara

Constance La France

Date: 4/30/2024 6:46:00 PM

Sara, beautiful, I love this haiku. I am trying to send you a soupmail but it will not go through, Constance

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 4:08:00 AM

thanks for stopping by; grateful you enjoyed my Haiku! Thank you. I received your Soup Mail...am making the corrections. enjoy your day, hugs, Sara