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Betrayal In the morn, the foggy creek’s rise Its gentle whispers a sweet surprise But beneath the surface, secrets lie Love’s betrayal, tears in my eyes Spring’s promise a fleeting delight Yet disappointment clouds my light Nature’s beauty, a fragile thing In love and seasons, echoes ring Betrayal’s sting, like thorns on a rose In the heart, a deep sorrow grows The creek still flows, the sun shines In nature’s embrace, solace I find In my pierced heart, bleeding is slow The scars are deep the wounds show Birds at the feeders and in flight New life born, such a delight

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Valsa George

Date: 5/17/2024 8:24:00 PM

"Betrayal’s sting, like thorns on a rose In the heart, a deep sorrow grows" "but in Natures embrace solace I find" When being betrayed in love, it is pain and leaves a deep scar in the mind. But when we turn to nature and watch the birds in flight and the creek flowing, we forget our wounds and become cheerful again. The solace nature gives is beautifully presented! Love and hugs dear Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/18/2024 4:01:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate you selecting some of your favorite lines. Nature does help us heal. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/16/2024 5:45:00 PM

loved the intertwining of emotions with nature...made for a sweet and captivating read. I felt a range of emotions. I too find solace in nature...I especially liked: "The scars are deep the wounds show' Wisdom in your words. Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/17/2024 1:11:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. Nature can be soothing to the soul and the suffering we go through at times. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/16/2024 10:02:00 AM

I admire your references to nature and feel the emotions in your poem. Thanks for reading my poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2024 3:14:00 PM

Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/16/2024 6:19:00 AM

Your opening stanza spelled the essence of your poem for me, Sara. A perfect weaving of nature and emotions:--In the morn, the foggy creek’s rise Its gentle whispers a sweet surprise But beneath the surface, secrets lie Love’s betrayal, tears in my eyes-- awesome!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2024 6:54:00 AM

I am glad you found something that spoke to you, Vijay. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/16/2024 6:09:00 AM

Dear Sara, your artistic verses unveil the raw vulnerability of betrayal's sting. Yet, even amidst heartache's thorns, your words find peace in nature's embrace - for beauty persists, and new life emerges from life's most painful seasons. I love your ability to channel such wonderful emotions through your poetic prowess which is a gift that allows your poetry to touch the soul's deepest crevices with empathy and wisdom. - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2024 6:53:00 AM

Why, thank you, Daniel. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 5/16/2024 5:02:00 AM

You've captured a notion I've thought much about. When things are going well the world is noticably beautiful. When the heart is broken nothing looks the same, though it is. Emotional poem Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2024 5:43:00 AM

I like your interpretation of the lines, Tom. Sometimes when we are suffering, just looking at God's creation helps heal the heart. Thanks for dropping by. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K