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BEST TO RUN AND HIDE

Inspired by “The Way of Love.” BEST TO RUN AND HIDE Lo-o-o-o-ve Wine in glasses blush ooh-la-la-la-la Friends say, “What’s the rush?” The swirl of first sips See him in my bowl There, close to my lips The mate of my soul For that kiss on rim Maybe draws him in The lipstick does stay To portend a win If the tongue does slide Like a French one does Better run and hide Sure to get a buzz (Repeat verses) (Outro) Best to run and hide To run and hide

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Date: 5/7/2024 6:18:00 PM
This is sensuous and playful- made me laugh, but still appreciated your voice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2024 7:05:00 PM
Thank you :) lol
Date: 5/5/2024 1:17:00 PM
Sounds wonderful to me Kim. Go for it! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 5:16:00 PM
Just a song. I’m married…lol
Date: 5/5/2024 7:25:00 AM
This was an ingenious poem. Beware the wine. I liked the sense of a second voice holding her in check. It is a festive , flirtatious poem of attraction that I enjoyed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! :)
Date: 5/5/2024 6:01:00 AM
Kim, I've heard of the speed of light, but we don't have enough science on the speed of love. You are very clever and funny here!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 5:16:00 PM
LOL…thank you, Duke!
Date: 5/5/2024 5:54:00 AM
elegant and beautiful lyrical words, Kim. I liked 'better run and hide...sure to get a buzz' as well as the ooh-la-la-la-la! A delightful read this morning. Have a splendid Sunday, hugs & blessings, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 5/4/2024 6:59:00 PM
so true, nice maxime poet, i do that so much, thanks for the wonderful and elegant poem, like a kid'song, a wonder
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2024 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!

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