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Beer Bettered Blues

Knuckles banged, finger cut; Bolt still bonded with the nut. Mind shaking, temper rising; Thoughts leading to a cruel surprising. Bankruptcy looming, crumbling affairs; Dreams dropping not by one but in pairs. Heart broke, soul shattered; Lost the only relationship that mattered. Sit? Relax? Sip a cold beer? Think before acting, the answer is near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/5/2018 12:48:00 PM
enjoyed reading this Micheal well done
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Date: 1/5/2018 9:15:00 AM
Brewing emotion well expressed, Michael.
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Date: 7/25/2017 2:14:00 AM
Your last couplet indeed. Think before acting, I agree with you .... Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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