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Bear Tracks In The Snow

You come to me, palpable, The way a candle flickers When the air is stirred, A vague mirage, a sense Of metaphysical existence But here, nevertheless, A wondering sensation one never forgets More than just a curiosity A part of me rises to you, Relinquishes itself to your fond greeting Almost forgetting that it wants What it doesn’t want – Something sweeter I once knew That lingers with an elemental truth Beneath the lid of observation; Something tender that I feel, A momentary remembrance Less melancholy than wistful, A taste of which before I kneel And then you go, are gone, Except the substance of your memory A lingering imprint – Proof enough, I know Like bear tracks in the snow

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Date: 5/10/2024 4:30:00 AM
i think i've commented before on the eloquence of your writing, and this is classically good free verse, very well written...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my latest
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John Oldham
Date: 5/12/2024 10:06:00 AM
With appreciation. Back at you :)
Date: 5/5/2024 12:51:00 PM
this poem eloquently captures the fleeting beauty and lingering resonance of human connection, memory, and longing. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of nostalgia and the enduring power of memory.
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John Oldham
Date: 5/8/2024 2:06:00 PM
Appreciate your thoughts, SO. Regards, John

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