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Bariatric Childhood

Monday blues............. The story of ages goes on Skin and bones like a cling film Tighten against empty stomachs Like bariatric procedures Another day.............. The daily walk of miles for Few drops of holy water Trickling in imagination like Lost mirages in sandy travails Earlyman lives on.............. Childhood is not a dance in elysian gardens But the kickstart of endless struggling days For starving children with ribbed bodies for morsels That we with callous hands disband in overflowing bins April 9, 2016 Picture # 1 For Silent One

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:38:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 4/14/2016 9:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Balveen:)
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 4/14/2016 7:16:00 PM
I think my words WERE magical. GREAT win, and congratulations.
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:45:00 AM
They sure were, Andrea! Thanks!
Date: 4/14/2016 6:12:00 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your placement in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/14/2016 5:51:00 PM
Congrats on your placement
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Brian!
Date: 4/11/2016 3:23:00 PM
Lovely write, Balveen. You got it just right about the underprivileged. You definitely deserve a prize in the contest. Karam
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/11/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Karam for your sweet thoughts!
Date: 4/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Balveen, this is a wonderful write for that image number 1, and the contest, best of luck, 7 ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/11/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thanks, dear Constance!
Date: 4/11/2016 1:49:00 PM
wow, I think you really captured the essence of that picture here. I hope you score high with this. GREAT write, Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/11/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! I hope your words are magical!

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