At The Bark

when the dogs went to the park an urge to pee was sparked So they lined up at a tree There was no fire hydrant you see And each took a turn at the 'bark' 5-4-2024

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2024 3:22:00 PM

My thats ruff stuff...Er? the bark that is.' And dogs Are always doing it...Drives me mad I was on Thd isle of dogs..'you see' before I moved to Barking.' Hmm." They are always doing it but What can i do? Being only lifes passenger.!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/7/2024 2:07:00 PM

Clever play on words, Joseph! Janice

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2024 8:05:00 PM

I wish my dogs were as well behaved :) best of luck with the contest, Joseph~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2024 11:17:00 AM

this is so darn funny Joseph and i love the title xx hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2024 10:27:00 PM

So cute . Love the joke at the end

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/5/2024 5:25:00 PM

LOL…they each took a turn at the bark.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/5/2024 9:43:00 AM

Magnificent limerick. Pity they don't do the same in Malta. Best for a win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/4/2024 7:33:00 PM

So cute and clever ! I can see each dog lining up at the bark, in the park. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/4/2024 5:13:00 PM

clever Limerick and great contest entry. Wishing you the best in the contest, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/4/2024 12:14:00 PM

Those is a great limerick. It has a lot of humor. I enjoyed this vignette of pooches.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/4/2024 12:08:00 PM

Hello Joe, your playful poem brings a smile to the heart, capturing the simple joys of canine camaraderie with humor and wit. It's a delightful way of showing life's small pleasures found in everyday moments. Keep sharing your lighthearted perspective with the world. Blessings, Daniel.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/4/2024 11:41:00 AM

Cute and well written limerick for the contest. I love the rhymes here. And how yours flow! Best wishes. Sending you light always

Silent One

Date: 5/4/2024 9:38:00 AM

Nice one... Great limerick for the contest.. Best of luck..