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Arduous ascent

Almost there but not quite, stuporous effort fails, for unless we’re the light, our deluded heart wails, whence struck by ego’s blight. Almost there but not quite, we tend to oscillate, in trance by day and night, as ego spawned thoughts bait, making us crouch in fright. Almost there but not quite, we’re twirled about by fate, sorrowful of our plight, trapped in fear, lust and hate, that makes us feel contrite. Almost there but not quite, holding steady resolve, our aura pure and white, breath by breath we evolve, seeing God, with clear sight.

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Date: 5/4/2024 2:55:00 PM
Another wonderful, inspiring write from you and this time in a Monchielle. I love the refrain line and also the last stanza especially,’ breath by breath we evolve, seeing God, with clear sight’. Your poems are always so wonderfully written with much depth and wisdom. So much insight in every line that you write. Awe inspiring. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 5/4/2024 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, Christina dear, God bless
Date: 5/4/2024 10:24:00 AM
You could turn anything into a spiritual poem.. the flow to this is excellent.. Spiritual sestina next?
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Date: 5/4/2024 7:26:00 PM
Sestina, yes I tried it a few times, not quite what I feel drawn to but I’ll give it another shot!

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