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Acid Rain

*/·) */ ·| */ · \ *(_·_) .| · | .| · | .| · | .| · | .| · | .| · | /#|_.| · | /\ (##(_| · |,_))) \###| · | /&/ \##)&__&&( )##&__&&\ /#|&&&___.&\\ (##\_&&&_'._)| \ ######## // "+,_____,+" Psychedelic notes, Strummed with creative wonder: From a lonely soul. · Music for the world, Crying guitar solos hum: Raining energy. · While his audience, Awaited the finale: Burning his guitar. ____________________ Inspired by Jimi Hendrix

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/28/2017 6:28:00 AM
Breathtaking poetic artistry, visually and linguistically, Raul. First poem of yours I've read, and I can already see you are a master craftsman w/the pen. This poem rocks! May love light your path always.
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:56:00 AM
Great form and a fan of Jimi.
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:33:00 PM
!!!
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Date: 12/15/2009 1:58:00 PM
Raul, this is simply brilliant, awesome, super - going to my favs, i thoroughly enjoy Jimi's sounds >> James
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:14:00 PM
A stunner here, Raul... I think he was probably from another planet, don't you? And maybe just stopped by to pay us a short visit? His performance at Woodstock certainly seems to suggest that! - Tim
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:47:00 PM
love the visual with the poem... and giving freedom to the reader to visualize the energy expressed with your artistic composition! wow! jim
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Date: 12/11/2009 5:36:00 AM
Massively righteous solo, my man! The notes blaze my ears! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:10:00 PM
Amazing work on the guitar, your creativity soars in my opinion. Nicely fitting to the poem itself, again amazing.
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:32:00 PM
That guitar is awesome, I have seen some of your past concrete work and I think you are by far so talented.
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:46:00 PM
I love your guitar...love Jimi Hendrix...but most of all I love your poem...Marty
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Date: 12/8/2009 1:05:00 PM
Holy Moley! That's the best picture art I ever saw here! You go guy! Stretch those wings! Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2009 9:51:00 AM
Unique idea, Raul, and quite creative.. U are a man of many talents... a fav for me.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:06:00 PM
Very beautiful design that had to take time and effort. Keep the designing keys busy. Sara
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Date: 12/4/2009 1:13:00 PM
an awsome tribute to Mr. hendrix.... great j-o-b R.M.
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Date: 12/4/2009 11:17:00 AM
this poem is definatly my fav of the day so far. love the hendrix expierience. love and peace: james......definatly headed to the favs
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Date: 12/4/2009 11:09:00 AM
I love Jimi Hendrix,one of my fav song s is "Castles made of Sand".. i looooooooooooooooovveeeeeeee this poem.......amaaaaaaaaaaaazinnnnnnnggggggggggglyyyyyyyy creative.. and that Guitar,We ve got his guitar,,,,,,Bravo Raul..going to my favzzzzz--Charma;)
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:38:00 AM
I have a new fav..... I REALLY like this poem..... Hendrix guitar.... OMG, how creative.....:JP]
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:14:00 AM
This piece of art is incredible....! WoW!! What multiple talents you have, Raul!
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:47:00 AM
A visual, textual superlative wonder, old friend ... a mastery from your storied genius is apt for the intended other genius of his craft. Well done, Raul, you concede nothing to time in your quest for sublimity. Peace and love
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:25:00 AM
Wonderful tribute, and I love the form of this poetry. Really nice! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/4/2009 3:20:00 AM
Nice tribute.
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Date: 12/4/2009 2:18:00 AM
A masterpiece! love Simone
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