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12/21/2023 3:40:32 PM
Romina Yaghubi Posts: 7
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And all these voices They sing along in my head I hear their shrills And I hear their screams They cry out for help They ask like beggars But they've come to the wrong place For there is no triumph to be found in here There is only a pile of cries And a pile of lies And a pile of hopeless loves Waiting to be spared
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3/4/2024 5:24:46 AM
Robert Rodriguez Posts: 2
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Good job
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