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1/20/2017 10:56:49 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
My Heart,



When I look at you I see as never before--

The silvery hue of water droplets on elephant ears--

A pink dawn of a new-born day--

The beauty of a blood-red dusk in May--

And if you before me go, then I will but surely follow




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