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1/20/2017 10:56:49 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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My Heart,
When I look at you I see as never before--
The silvery hue of water droplets on elephant ears--
A pink dawn of a new-born day--
The beauty of a blood-red dusk in May--
And if you before me go, then I will but surely follow
1/20/'17 edited by Gabe on 1/20/2017 edited by Gabe on 1/20/2017 edited by Gabe on 1/20/2017
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