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9/2/2016 7:19:06 PM Seth Diamond Posts: 17	Looking for help... should I junk it and begin anew? The King and the Cripple. /poem/the_king_and_the_cripple_825330
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11/8/2016 2:58:32 AM Jerome Malenfant Posts: 26	Junk it.
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12/2/2016 1:00:17 AM Kaminszakr Posts: 1	Great One, loved -- http://www.3d-architectural-rendering.com/Animation-Design-Studio.html
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12/5/2016 1:02:35 PM Graphite Drug Posts: 81	The idea or conception of your poem is interesting. The writing works, but your rhymes and rhyming scheme does not. First, try something other than AAAA etc. Second, try not use obscure words like abbe, and don't use words with variable pronunciation like cache. There is no need to scrap this work, it should inspire something good and is a learning experience. Definitely take another swipe at it, there is some usable material here.
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