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8/22/2013 10:32:40 AM
sindiswa mhlanga Posts: 1
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Its a silenced heart grieving in sight looking at hershe's just a child
cheated out of her own rights her mind goes blind for the bruises on her back are a mark of art
so painful she strives for her pitful life so sadly she crys all day night
with no food to eat she roams around the streets seeking for some shelter and peace
lost in pain,is she with a open wound in her heart and a memory to last lost in pain,is he with a scar on his face a memory never shared
''oh how my heart drawns when i hear the crys of those broken sounds''
''oh how my heart bleeds when i hear the stories of those in need''
''mother can you here me? i'm out here can't you see''... ''mother don't denie me for i don't have a father... ...iam more,more than that you think of
i maybe nothing today... for tommorow will come in different way ''mother im your child'' hear the sounds of my tears at noon feel my pains through the moon
so in doom i wont cry no more for my heart is in the stars of your eyes.
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