Suspence Poems | Examples

Premium Member The Keyhole

Just like her favorite character Alice she dresses up. Around her neck a key adorns.  On her way she goes. She has read of a keyhole that holds heaven on the other side of its door. A young girl named Cassy sits curiously by a riverbank. Twirling her long tresses as she peeks into reflecting waters, she fiddles with the key.  It falls into the river, and she jumps in after it.  Swimming for what seems forever, she lifts her head.  At first blurry swishes of gardens and trees are all she sees. The images clearer, around her stars of sterling silver.  The other side of the world is shimmering ever so bright!  Cassy in awe, hears the chirping of birds, then swims further searching on the river bottom. 
Waterdrops drip off her face as she takes a breath, back through the door, she clings to the key in her hand, the wren's singing their bird song.

Baptism took place
let go the crutch that holds back~
the child she flows

Lacking Sense

sensitivity is killing humour, 
actually that's wrong, 
humour is linked to intelligence, 
so if they fail to sea the funny sense 
their probably dense, 
which is easily confused with taking a fence.... 
see what i did there intents 
fantastic suspence holds up tents
spastic pens roll ink-tensive ends

the lack of sense is the sense
it's a matter of intelligence
sexist is intelli-gent
or is it In-tena-lady 
Trans-elligence 
humour not evident

Till the Next Time

How long since we last met,
mutual pleasure
held in vacuous abeyance,
how long since we last touched
moments to treasure
in suspence without conveyance,
how long since we last kissed,
the softness of your lips recalled,
a silent eloquence,
how long since we last hugged,
thoughts of your caress
a warm rememberance,
how long since we last loved,
memories banished,
replaced by breathless anticipation.


Mysterious Word

Tinking 
of 
u 
all 
day,
i 
thought 
it 
was 
ordinary,
later 
i 
realised 
its 
extraordinary.

I 
realised 
som1 
sighing 
on 
my 
ear. 
All 
i 
hear 
is .......
Wat 
could 
dis 
be?  
It 
kept 
me 
in 
suspence.
Day!
Night!!

I 
tried 
to 
get 
an 
ideal,
but 
it 
was'nt 
working.

I 
went 
to 
the 
land 
of 
MYSTRY.
The 
bird 
sang 
a 
song 
saying 
"i 
love 
u, 
you 
love 
me"...
Hmmm... 
Thinking....ideal 
coming.,
wat 
is 
it... 
Hahahaha... 
It's 
great.

 It 
says... 
I
         LOVE
           YOU.
Hmm.. 
Sigh.. . 
@ 
last..

The Centenary of Nigeria

A hundred year is gone,
Suspence still fill the air.
Truly, the signs are with us.
About an exodus?
But no, not a plague of locust,
It's a plague of men.
The people are the disaster
Since naturally we have none.
Arise O compatroits.
To serve our fatherland
What has happened to the song we sing?
Why the irony?
Why tampering on the bond
Of peace and unity?
Why letting vain cause to overthrow
The labours of our heroes past?
O democracy! don't fail us now
O God of creation!
Direct our noble cause
Help our youth the truth to know
That we move again as a nation
towards great lofty height to attain
One nation bound in freedom
Peace and unity.

The Real Thing - To a Friend of Mine

I've been held in suspence
Wondering if you'd break my rules
So I could repent
The Real thing is
Im a horrible friend
But If you can forgive me 
We can begin again
My Avitar - Thats the real me
I know many have been waiting to see
I use to hide away 
Locked behind closed doors
But I left that Jackass
And now, what can I say - Watch Out World
I use to go by a lonely name myself
The Lost Little Poet
Well, now shes found herself
Im risky and Ive got appeal
Im only 19 but I know whats real
Life is harsh, and every one needs a friend
Im not the best and I cant promise I wont leave again
But what do you say 
Lets give it a try
Be friends and write sonets in the sky
What do you think
I cant tell you much else
This is the real me
And Im ready to give the world hell


The Loud Cloud

Her cloud cloud came out proud 
and loud this afternoon...
do not mind the clever coward,
she will cow very soon.
The dusky wind has got 
a ploy to paint the moon,
Oh watch her drift away as 
the whirlwind croons!

Doubters like fraudsters 
speculate on shadows
dancings to the sweet 
songs of pilgrim sparrows,
you have got no raindrops
but you cleverly craft a rainbow
while you drown in a 
daylight dream on your pillow

Silence to you is not 
suspence
but pure pretence
your heart is immersed 
in impregnable impatience.
A rose in the room you are, 
ripped of her radiance;
why show up in the field, 
feigning fine fragrance?

Backed Against the Wall

I'm backed against, I'm trapped against
I'm backed against this wall
When its that intense I lack some sense
then bad events evolve
My last suspence has me past convinced
that I have to dent some skulls
This path I went is in fact an attempt
to stay on track and fix my flaws
Stack chips from wall to wall
and forget about my down falls
Put the past behind me like hineys
& continue climbing 
Finding that while driving
these struggles is what define me
I'm crushing every obstical
failing isn't optional
Stay clear of whats unstoppable
& witness the impossible
I only do what is I gotta do
to survive gotta have a lot of food
This ground I stands all i got to lose
so not an inch of me is about to move

Love Out Loud

A treasure seeker sitting on 
a tender tree of tears,
dreaming of a delightful 
dance with a darling,
while feasting on fruits of 
faith in the field of fears,
like the wind's whispers, 
whirling in the womb of 
wishes,
hope hovers in a humble 
heart seeking a happy 
home.

A sweet smile is sent  yet 
silence soils this suspence,
your unspoken words are  
wealthy yet so worthless,
why flaunt a flower in the 
darkroom of your dazzling 
desire,
when your flame of 
friendship still has fresh 
fire,

oh salivating soul, wake 
from your sleep and 
slumber,
approach that alluring 
apple while it is sweet and 
tender,
come out of the womb of 
wishes to a wooing world,
spread your spirit, soar to 
the skies to snug that star.

Lend from the lulaby of the 
moonlight, love out loud,
give not colours of your 
care to the claws of cloud,
till there is a awesome 
arrival of 
that angel in your arms,
filling your world with 
warmth, cheers and 
charms.

Truth's Tongue

I wish, I only wish the truth has a tongue...
To tell talebearers they are truly rotten and 
wrong,
while thinking they're sincere and strong...

I know, I truly know lies won't live long...
Though it's tempting like the tales of throng,
it won't stand the sounds of sincerity's song.

I pray, I only pray, we see the signs so 
strong...
That truth has a tongue, it sings a stern song,
and that lies won't live long, though it seems 
strong.

O that we may hear in heart the speech of 
silence,
and sweetly see with senses, the sights of 
suspence,
how purity pitched it's tent in the palace of 
patience.

Time, only time will tell that virtue has a voice,
though the ruthless & riotious seldom rejoice,
When in time, truth speaks, shame is their 
only choice.

My Love

Looking into your burning eyes supplies me with suspence. 
As if you scare me into a reality of fear. 
Nothing in my life is as satisfying as you. 

Fear is the only feeling I get when you are there. 
When your away, I scream in pain. 
Nothing can take you away from me. 

I am in your arms holding on to your soul. 
My heart is burning for desire. 
Help me control it, I am losing your sight. 

Happier when I am in your arms. 
But I am crying when your gone. 
My blood stops flowing into my veins. 

Your beautiful hazel eyes race through my mind. 
I feel incomplete without you, as if I am cold and dead. 
Your blood needs to flow through my veins. 

My eyes are blindsided by your perfectness. 
Drowning in my fear I shout your name. 
All with in my broken heart you say you love me. 

I wish I could meet you one day. 
But maybe in my dreams. 
You will always be my love.

The Critic

Well, to start off with
The title doesn't make any sense
It's either way too long or just too short
And there just wasn't  enough suspence

You forgot to capitalize your letters
You better keep an eye on the flow
You're telling the story way too fast
Or, I'm sorry, it was a little too slow

Your spelling is just simply awful
A little punctuation would be nice
The words you use are too simple
You're saying the same thing twice

You don't even know what a syllable count is
I don't know what you're trying to say
There just isn't enough emotion
It shouldn't have ended that way

Your rhymes are too repetitious
There's simply no rhyming at all
You really need to practice your typing
Your font is always too small

You really need to start all over
I'm sorry, this one had me snoring
You must be haunted by writer's block
I find it a little too boring

I guess everyone has their critics
It seems like they're always annoyed
But our poems aren't written to please them
They're written to be enjoyed

as i listen to those who are televised
the television has me under control, hypnotized
living my rendition of those who criticize
i´m thinking my opinion is outside the box, 
but its not, its inside

i´m boxed in, imprisoned by the devil´s eyes, 
my contact lenses, and all i see is lies,
half truths which are fiction in disguise
a leading role too evil to describe?
outside the box?, i think not, its inside

comedy, action, suspence, tears,
a soundtrack that complements my ears 
i call it C.A.S.T., a cast of your own peers
auditioning to heal the wounds inflicted
on you through the years

as i opened my eyes i still had them shut
thinking the dream was over, thinking 
¨I´ve had enough¨
not knowing I was still asleep, still cuffed
began to think outside the box and woke up

as i opened my eyes i found that box
and turned it off, 
turned it back on and put my life on pause
taking a moment to think
outside the box

Freudian Slips

Rediscovered What's sane maybe 
the matter with me?
hiding blinded voice

Difficult why leave?
  am i soo collective tired?
eventually you realities

will dream  thing get beings better?
being dream

Souls I like tricking soo many things about suspence you
i like ignorances things truths about me
slide

what added tortures will stay tomorrow speaking bring angels altruisticly?

Random Plans do you Overthrow someone like me Forbidden keys too?

do darknesses we Love mankind simply have a poeticly strategic future?

Time am I Subconcious good enough to hate?
Thought mutiny to protect

Ponderewd will i souls changes make married making you happy?
change

Held My Hands (My Secret Sin)

Ease your thoughts
For I am at fault
You stood alone
Well I left home 
In my most troubling steps 
I sensed your worry, your passion your grace 
As only your soft touch could warm my face
My only comfort was in your arms, a peaceful place
Is the only sanctuary where time won't mourn
And trust won't turn
A sacrifice at your expense
Left us both in suspence
But it was your heart I had to convince
Would you have held my hand
I ask would you have my hand
Shadows sing 
As the weak trade bread and water for anything
The only place you felt feign
Was the only place where your trust remains
Nothing so cold as your shoulder shrugs 
Nothing told that you cared as your fervid hugs 
I'd say I loved you in vain
But it would only sober up my pain
Burning leaves 
The stress that lonliness guareentees 
I only ask would you have held my hand
With me being so stubborn and arrogant
Would you still stand and hold my hand 
Would you have shaped me into a better man
Walked through conflict and still gripped my hand

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