Disappointment Poems | Examples

Pomegranate

Pomegranate 

Careful, tentative and delicate tips shiver over the forgiving skin
Shell barring the bloody body of the fruit 
Only condemned to,
consumption

Bruising without protest 
Its sweetness not asked for - only expected

Though some things are more beautiful broken

Premium Member Lost Thoughts

pages of haiku  confetti in the wind


Premium Member Feel your Feelings

Allow yourself to go
beyond numbing disappointment
and put words to how you feel

Stop brushing everything aside like nothing matters
Bring your emotions out in daylight
Don’t hide and gloss them over ~ analyze them

Do away with self censorship
Dig deeper ~ know you’re entitled 
to feelings and to express them

No longer silence the inner child
who gets offended and wants to cry
Be its champion ~ let it speak up and be heard

Feelings are what allows you to 
explore the why of who you are
Expressing feelings is what helps
connect with others through understanding

Premium Member I’m fine

How are you doing?

You ask but quickly move on
not waiting for my answer ~
You ask not really wanting to know.

The truth being you don't expect
to hear how I am feeling.
You ask but are quite
satisfied not knowing
so you can resume your fantasy
that I am fine.

The reality is that I'm trying
to hold back the flood gates
long enough for you to manage
to get your act together.

How long are we going to avoid
the elephant in the room?
You're right to not get me started.
Don't go there.
Don’t... Just don’t.



AP: 1st place 2025

Premium Member Life as a Book

I had glorious plans for my life. 
Warm ink transforming blank pages, 
destined to be a best seller! 
I felt specially bound. 

Printing press cranked out 
a glossy-colored cover, 
my name plastered 
in bold black letters for all to see. 

Signed inside by my creator 
I only rested on the bookstore shelf 
for three bitter hours 
before someone adopted me. 

Held gingerly each night by gentle fingers, 
eagerly offering my very soul 
until snores dropped me 
on soft, disheveled blankets. 

Word by word and line by line, 
page by page, and chapter by chapter. 
Night after night, I was dynamite 
till shut tight. 

Is that all there is? 
I've slept for ten years now... in a box, 
in a cobwebbed corner of a cluttered closet, 
dressed up and no place to go. 

I'm suffocating!


Premium Member Takes a mountain to deliver a molehill

I gave you every chance
I trusted and I believed in you
~ was I asking too much?


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Double standards

zero tolerance
for stupidity
yet here I am
putting up
with your
shenanigans



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Mid Summer Blues

we thought we were ready
till the unexpected fell upon us

such high expectations
for fun and adventure
plans for get-aways
excursions and discoveries

the days and weeks go by
another summer slips away



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Why embarass yourself?

You're not doing a stellar job
distracting me with idle chatter.

Life is not something to be ignored
and swept under a mat.
I've been living in limbo
no matter how you sugarcoat it.

Life is short and every beat matters.
Every day is another notch in the cog of time fleeting.
Life is a race to the finish line,
an obstacle course of sorts.

Ignoring the elephant in the room is
an embarassing act of cowardice.
Sometimes saying something-anything
is better than the insult of shameless pussyfooting.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member pinched in the night

nothing hurts like
silence from a lover's heart
while the stars are singing with delight



AP: 1st place 2025

Premium Member When it comes to anything with me


... NO seems to be the word that pops to mind




AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Patio Letdown

there’s something dreary
about a terrasse drenched in rain
can’t help but take it personally
like a missed invitation
to an afternoon drink with friends
or a cancelled party

a dull hush lacks warmth
too early or too late
no one at the rendez-vous
no welcoming sunshine
stood up by the host

a final rinse
the rain lets up
the earth on pause
before the sun breaks through
and sets everything on cue



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member what have i become

i lowered my guard and let you in
a child-man disappointing me at every turn

i'm fuming under my hat
half afraid of an explosion

one step forward
two steps back

how easy it is to close my eyes
and pretend everything's alright

a balancing act when in fact we are
at opposite ends of the spectrum

have i become someone who settles
or are my dreams still out there within grasp

Premium Member Bad Habit

I'm still alive cos living’s my bad habit
And like a bird is used to feel the saving sky
I’m used to live on autopilot so won’t rub it
With multiplying the essential reasons why 
But disappointment gets too huge to handle
Got to bargain myself a little beggar mind
To think more highly of the immigration ramble 
As if I’m going something worth to find 
The owners of the world are getting funny
Prescribing me the way of life that suits
Their plans to know how well I spend my money
How deeply I respect some nation’s roots
To meet their needs, I’m into consolations
I’m on the sunny side of every street and lane
Let’s make a deal, I’ll spread your cheap sensations
If you help me that beggar mindset to attain.

Disappointment

I smiled when I saw
The figure in front
I ran to get close
But only hugged smoke

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