Best Unedited Poems
Bent Not Broken - Unedited VersionI fight
a battle against tempestuous wind
fury the earth’s ablaze in feverish sky
and I survivor
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Categories:
unedited, abuse, courage, emotions, loss,
Form:
Free verse
The Downside of Being a Poet-UneditedPoets have a greater capacity
to express love and longing
painting pictures of passion's pleasures
They excite and ignite the imagination
That's the beauty of being a poet
Poets are so steeped in the need for beauty in wording
that they use their talents even in posts
Weaving wonder with words
they make...
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Categories:
unedited, poets, words,
Form:
Free verse
Cast Out-UneditedWhy
And why now?
I can't believe I had told myself you had changed
Defending you, against everyone
Who told me it would end up this way
Angry
So angry that the walls we built still stand
And we raised the sails and set the ship to sail once more
But the wreckage...
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Categories:
unedited, anger, friend, friendship, hurt,
Form:
Free verse
Lost and Found -Unedited Version-Writing a masterpiece
Takes so much effort and thought
My mind’s settling in my comfort zone – feed me with flawless peace
Words seem to escape me…my feelings mean naught
Anger molds me in inside and out…I feel insecure again
Peace barely meets my body
Joy seems to abandon me...
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Categories:
unedited, beauty, confusion, courage, dark,
Form:
Rhyme
UneditedWe are of the ground
Electricity flows deep inside me
You cannot harness it
Because
I do not know it is there
Deep with in
And with in comes
With everything
Attached ti me is a soul
Morals that govern my entire existence
Profound Power that is...
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Categories:
unedited, beautiful, change, confidence, courage,
Form:
Didactic
Unedited NowThe air surrounds me brisk.
Sounds from the city evoke me.
People are nearby but in this moment;
I am alone.
The chimera close by secure me a halfer.
Smoke is now gone but I do not crave for another.
You are the one.
Only if I allow...
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Categories:
unedited, creation,
Form:
Didactic
This Unedited Version of MeI wake up to a recurrent vision-
This emergent self belongs
To body, spirit, and dream.
A different kind of measurement
Lies at the gates of unchosen.
I float a ready channel of grace
Within the airy sighs of the pages
In the book of blank letters,
Where immersion feels fluid...
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Categories:
unedited, absence,
Form:
Free verse
Unedited VerseFrom the first page I open to the book of life
Written in fluently opulent language of :
A fleeting cloud and crisis-ridden sky
In cries of hues and halos
The milkyway beyond our horizon suspends the moon
That rules the spheres after noon.
And the sun accentuating power...
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Categories:
unedited, nature, language, language,
Form:
Pastoral
Head space in the art space uneditedI'm back.
Stood in from of the Marc Chagall
That is quietly across the road
I don't know what else is quietly sitting just out of my eyeline
Whether wraparound sentences are indeed my friend
Where am I again? Ahh, here.
Experiencing a painting with more within it than I...
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Categories:
unedited, art,
Form:
Free verse
Uneditedfirst impressions last longer
lost in the sands of times
last impressions lives forever
penned in mind's of men
treasured in the rhymes of mines
engraved in the tombs pains
inscribed in the palms of history
tattooed in the art of fame
last impressions
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first impressions
last impressions
uneditable
end justifies
the means.
puncture foes fears
broken into pieces...
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Categories:
unedited, absence, abuse, anger, betrayal,
Form:
Free verse
Beach Ball - Unedited - See 'Teach Me a Lesson' ContestThere's a beach ball stuck in the rafters of the pool
It's been there for the 7 years I've been coming here
It contains air from the lungs of an unknown person, an essence that rests here though they left and likely never consider the fact
I wonder...
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Categories:
unedited, anxiety,
Form:
Free verse