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In Greek Mythology, Thanatos represents death. In psychoanalysis, a person’s urge toward death or self-harm—Random Word    *

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* Everyone grieves in their own way ~ time will only tell if healing comes, * for some, deaths blanket; unbearable and Thanatos is nearby —poetess * * Despair? so be it. * If else, is there? how does one bear * the cold loss, dooming despair sadness deepens * when * first breath taken, Reaped, listlessness creeps * Lethargic fate what does it rate on a splinting scale? Repress with a paralyzing scalpel * severing deaths pathway to a pining lobe Incase powerless, * with a lack, while lactating breasts bleed tears Depress with Thanatos’s betrayal * As nipples * drip with nourishment in a holy grail * wetted reminders that youth itself hold no leniency The warm blanket of death betrays a death wish, ineffectual this death drive strays a young mother’s dreams vanish * in thin air, * one too frail, grows pail numbness, quietness, * and repetition, The warm blanket of death betrays Yet she is not * alone, but lonely They watch the despair she holds These spirits, soulful * a family's surrounding * with love’s repair *carrying * the warmth that fans of a love true * God's plan * * *

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Date: 4/12/2025 6:42:00 PM
Gods plan is always that we hold fast to him, and never despair. thankyou for such a lovely heart felt poem today dear Anaya
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Date: 4/13/2025 11:28:00 AM
Greiving and broken-hearted, but not in despair as Jesus abides, beautiful, Mystic Rose. It reminds me of The Bleeding-Heart representing Mother Mary's grief for her son. Happy Palm Sunday ~ Anaya
Date: 4/12/2025 3:58:00 PM
Such a magnificent poem, Anaya, that tackles the intricate emotions of despair, grieving, and the battle between life and death. It portrays a young mother's tremendous dismay, feeling isolated and forlorn, but concurrently conveying the existence of love and assistance from invisible beings.
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Date: 4/12/2025 4:10:00 PM
...angles and family will help her mend after all it is God's plan. Las, if i may call Las nothing more devastating than losing a child, not that i know of.Ty for your kind words! xhugs

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