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A cool wind is making the trees breathe in a slow melodic way The wind moves the leaves on the ground, making a path for itself Is the wind trying to get my attention? Trying to tell me to slow down I go outside and stand in the open path where the leaves once settled The feeling is calming, soothing, trance inducing I let the breeze blow my hair, and caress my arms The feeling is so wonderful, I smile It feels as though my heart is warming The cool breeze is embracing me I am welcoming it with open arms As the breeze slows to a whisper I feel myself letting go, allowing calm to enter I will hold onto this feeling until the cool wind beckons me again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/28/2019 4:38:00 AM
It feels as though my heart is warming// beautiful poem
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:54:00 PM
I love the feeling of freedom that you invoke with the wind....letting go...so important... JOY
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Date: 10/18/2018 11:40:00 AM
Calming, beautiful piece Susan, well done...
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Susan Rigo
Date: 10/18/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 10/17/2018 2:50:00 PM
I have often sat in a cool wind and tried to write the feeling of it. You have done it for the both of us. Thank you!
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Susan Rigo
Date: 10/17/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Caren!
Date: 10/16/2018 6:06:00 PM
Hello Susan Rigo, so nice to meet you. When i am walking and the strong wind is blowing, it is telling me to walk faster. Have a nice day my friend. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Susan Rigo
Date: 10/17/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/16/2018 4:11:00 PM
How perfectly lovely.
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Susan Rigo
Date: 10/16/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much.

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