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Clattering coins forcefully flung inside a fragmented glass jar, doleful howls full of misery, woe nocturnal creatures arise, rapid rotations, continual tornados tedious echos beneath a derelict railway tunnel, nefarious lightning strikes the thunder, rolling immensely enraged she roars fighter jets in fury, disturbed bees, swarming their hive stalking, terrorising, pestering a solo stone plunges down a bottomless well, belligerent twangs upon a jilted ukulele, these were her hunger pangs, which fed her insomnia at night.

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Date: 10/16/2020 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Joanna, love your imagery and the feeling in your poem. Hugs Eve
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/16/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thank you fir your lovely comment. :-) x
Date: 8/26/2020 5:38:00 PM
I've enjoyed reading your poem this evening Joanna,
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/27/2020 1:33:00 AM
Thank you :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs