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Written for the contest " when silence speaks" sponsored by craig cornish.
sometimes, in silence, so many carry secrets, dark and haunting, like childhood abuse, and torment theyve faced .. this poem highlights that.

When silence speaks in broken dialects, to harmonize hurt, I ponder, would the sky unravel synonyms for serenity, amidst piercing thunder that strikes through raining regrets~ upon flowers, swaying forsaken, to butterfly ballads? But will oblivious eyes, roaming the blackness of selfish spheres~ where prayers are abandoned as meaningless metaphors, ever feel the darkness we carry, when tears no longer flow in lakes with swans, to be seen? It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain, as childhood fears scribbled as forbidden secrets~ rewind on repeat through holographic lens of life, mirroring bloodstained fingerprints etched across linen of chastity… So tonight, when blue moon in my mind ascends in insomniac stillness, listen to the sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks of an onyx rose, as vandalized veins scream in helplessness, awaiting a sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters, while I remain, in mists of misery, weaving prose, to erase tattooed torment that stole starry symphonies within my soul. ..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2024 2:52:00 PM

Interesting winner. Congratulations. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/12/2024 4:00:00 PM

IE, this is very insightful. I think many abused people come up with mechanisms to try to deal with what happened, but these solutions don't often work very well. The fix is never easy and not everyone can get to a reasonable place afterwards. Your language and images are stark. I also hope you are well. This is for a contest, but the images evoke real pain in my mind. I've suffered plenty in my life, so I know it when I see it even when it's hard to spot. You are a wonderful poet!!

Hiba Junaid

Date: 5/11/2024 1:35:00 PM

oh how painful it is to suffer alone. lonely mostly. the silence is loud but the worst part is that it's only loud to you. your poem beautifully captures that. it is an ode to that. i really enjoyed it.

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2024 3:20:00 PM

Oh my sweet Ink….another beautiful poignant ,moving write! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:34:00 AM

Awn thank you debx i appreciate your kind visits

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/10/2024 5:48:00 AM

i feel great and sincere empathy in your words, you can listen people and console their pains i guess, this is so beautifully written, enjoyed, take care dear poet

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:34:00 AM

Thank you so much always for reading and for your sincere visits

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/10/2024 2:46:00 AM

How can I not admire your style of writing? Gorgeous even if sad. I pray for the light to help you. Pain and loneliness are so centered in your poem. Such a wonderful poem.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:25:00 AM

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment dear victor. Im grateful for your kindness always

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/9/2024 4:48:00 PM

This is a deep poem with a philosophical look at silence. It goes to the root of fears. Good luck with the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/9/2024 6:23:00 AM

So many great lines. A great contender for Craig’s contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:25:00 AM

Thank you richard i appreciate your kindness

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2024 4:40:00 AM

"Erasing tattooed torment that stole starry symphonies from within the soul", Very nicely penned

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:25:00 AM

Thank you Joseph always

Valsa George

Date: 5/9/2024 1:06:00 AM

Silence speaking in broken dialects suggests so much. Blue moon ascending in insomniac stillness is a powerful image. Here the question is will "the sky unravel synonyms for serenity, amidst piercing thunder that strikes through raining regrets".The darkness and despair we carry within are never noticed by oblivious eyes as long as tears don't run down our cheeks in streams. It is in muteness, we reveal suppressed pain. Yet there is hope of a 'sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters,". This poem of pain, torment, hope and loneliness reflect the nuances of life and the inevitable vagaries of human existence. Another marvelous poem , dear Empress.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:24:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear sweet valsa you are so kind and generous! Im truly so very grateful for your poetic and sincere presence and warmth you share so selflessly. Grateful

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/8/2024 7:28:00 PM

Your poem explores the profound intricacies of grief, loneliness, and the inherent human longing for solace, dear Ink. The evocative depictions take the reader to a place where the seamless integration of nature and human emotions creates a symphony of raw and unrestrained potency. The poem's creepy look is intensified by the references to past transgressions woven into recollections and the depiction of a blue moon ascending in a state of sleeplessness. These elements accentuate the speaker's anguish and their desperate want for solace. Your poetry explores the intricacies of the human experience, eliciting a spectrum of emotions and capturing the timeless battle for serenity amidst challenges.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for not just reading but also understanding the depth of what iv expressed here. I appreciate your indepth analysis and how selflessly youv supported this poem. Thank you always

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/8/2024 6:08:00 PM

Your words echo through the halls of memory, a poignant story of hurt and silent words that scar, even through all that pain, the soothing balm of your poetic skillful words covers me, well done Ink, its a winner for sure !

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:06:00 AM

Awn sweet rose what a beautiful and thoughtful comment this is, truly im touched by your sweet response. Im grateful to have you around

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/8/2024 2:55:00 PM

this is an excellent entry for the contest; some memorable lines with very good imagery and alliteration..i predict a top placement for this!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for your kind response appreciate the support always

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2024 2:24:00 PM

Interesting lines penned for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 2:01:00 AM

Thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2024 1:08:00 PM

Always you use such fascinating images with your creative flair with adjectives! Hope you get a win, my friend. You deserve it.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:55:00 AM

Ah I tried not using too many adjectives in this one. Thank you so much dear sweet andrea im always grateful for your kindness and support

Silent One

Date: 5/8/2024 12:41:00 PM

Your poem is a profound exploration of the intricacies of pain, silence, and the longing for solace. The imagery is rich and evocative, drawing the reader into a world where emotions and nature intertwine in a symphony of raw intensity.The final stanzas of the poem convey a sense of longing for redemption and healing, as the speaker seeks solace in the promise of a sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters. The imagery of a blue moon ascending in insomniac stillness and the reference to sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks add a haunting quality to the poem, underscoring the depth of the speaker's pain and the desperate search for relief.. Your poem is a moving exploration of the human experience, capturing the complexity of emotions and the enduring quest for inner peace amidst the storms of life.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:55:00 AM

Thank you silent one for your kind and generous feedback analyzing the depth of what iv expressed here. Grateful and touched by the warmth you spread in the most uplifting manner:

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/8/2024 11:02:00 AM

Dearest Inky, your opening line sets up every exquisite word that follows. What a brilliant image of "broken dialects." As always, your command of imagery is awesome - "vandalized veins," "bleeds balmy ointments," "melted muteness." You have harnessed this theme with your amazing gift of poetic expression. Just awesome! Best wishes for the contest, dear friend. Blessings! Samzy~

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:54:00 AM

Dear samszy, its always such a pleasure hearing from you and you come always like the sun sprinkling light where ever you go. I appreciate the detailed commentary, and also how youv highlighted lines you liked. Thank you once again im so touched by your warm presence

Paige Hind

Date: 5/8/2024 10:48:00 AM

So delicate and beautiful, dear Ink- the ending is so sad, I wish your hopes will come true, to heal "burnt blisters" making "prose"....

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:51:00 AM

Awn thank you so much for reading as always and for leaving your comment. Im grateful for your support always

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/8/2024 10:00:00 AM

When silence speaks in broken dialects, to harmonize hurt, Mmmm that line hits goooood…prayers are abandoned as meaningless metaphors, ooo child … sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks of an onyx rose, ooo gorgeous!!!! It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain, the sense on loneliness in that line!!! Mmm .. this weave is breathtaking papi!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:51:00 AM

Thank you papi for reading grateful for your support

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/8/2024 7:31:00 AM

This is so deep. It covers a lot of ground of a child's heartache. The verses truly cover the speech of silence. Good luck with the contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:48:00 AM

Thank you so much dear hilda, i always appreciate your kindness and selfless support, truly

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/8/2024 6:16:00 AM

your poem was so evocative, dearest Ink, and a brilliant contest entry. Your metaphors spoke of heartfelt pain from suppressed childhood fears. Reading your words I felt the tormented soul (inner child) and wanted to hug her and carry her way to safety. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:44:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind and heartfelt response. Always grateful for your poetic support

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/8/2024 6:09:00 AM

Your poem speaks eloquently to the silence that hides painful secrets and haunting memories that ache through life. Superb diction and splendid metaphors throughout, Ink.---It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain, as childhood fears scribbled as forbidden secrets~ rewind on repeat through holographic lens of life, mirroring bloodstained fingerprints etched across linen of chastity---A FAVE, indeed!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear vijay for the fave and also for commenting. Im so grateful always for your poetic presence

Tom Woody

Date: 5/8/2024 5:17:00 AM

I was just watching a video last night about a Mexican man who left home and came to USA at nine years old due to father being abusive alcoholic. He eventually got into boxing and through that world into drug dealing. His mentor was murdered and he returned home at fifteen to find his mom studying the Bible and home life much different. Long story short he's now a happy man with a nice family of his own. But the tears flowed as he told his story. Anyway, your excellent poem brought that to mind

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:42:00 AM

Thats very inspiring and interesting. Whats the name of the movie? I watch so many of those too. Sometimes men have no other option but to move on while carrying all the pain once endured in silence, eventually they flow when telling their story. I always appreciate your comments and support. Thank you so very much

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 5/8/2024 2:15:00 AM

Well written.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:39:00 AM

Thank you so much

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 5/8/2024 2:09:00 AM

Insomniac stillness …. That’s where I am … beautiful write .

Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:39:00 AM

Awn i understand dahlin. I can imagine, thank you for reading this