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What Lurks Within

Emptiness pervades this room. A barren womb, Devoid of life. Quiet is the light it bears— Without shadows. These four walls yearn for dressing To yield warmth For the cold and desolate Spirit held within. This is a fallow cell that Awaits the dwelling seed— A fertile family Whose footsteps will cultivate The pulse of life— The embryo— The promise of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2013 10:12:00 PM
I like the form you write this piece. It's one of my favorite. Congrats on your big win ~A.O
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:25:00 AM
Hi many congratulations on your winning place Ray
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Date: 4/7/2013 8:33:00 PM
Congrats, this is so descriptive I feel as if I'm looking in. Nice job! J
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Date: 4/7/2013 6:59:00 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2013 6:10:00 PM
I like the way you described what lurks within, Ray. Congratulations in Seren's "what lurks within" contest. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
Interesting take on the contest. Well done congratulations.
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Date: 4/7/2013 4:45:00 PM
congratulations ...Seren
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Date: 3/21/2013 10:23:00 PM
Hello Ray, a deep poem ... I like the way we stepped into life once we left the embryo... always~ Linda
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Date: 3/21/2013 8:19:00 PM
Nicely done Ray. good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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