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white capped peaks appear then go cresting mountains blue and green with prayers that triton’s spear won’t show we cross what lays between old skalds tell of the tempest’s wrath this realm no man’s to own if careless of the swell and trough you’ll reap the seeds you’ve sewn with wary looks cast overboard caulked timbers flex and cry and oaths that seek divine accord entreat the leaden sky I promise I’ll go between no more I’ll not sail again I swear but then I itch to leave the shore to once more be out there so I’ll live in fear of her cold embrace of the pull and her sway over me when she calls my name with guileful grace my mistress of the sea

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Date: 1/21/2024 8:57:00 PM
There is an overabundance of beauty in this poem.. I felt as though I was on a boat in the sea and shivering. Good writing.
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Date: 1/21/2023 3:41:00 PM
i always like to read the first poem posted by a poet, and this one contains some lovely images and use of language..a warm welcome to poetry soup!
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Marcus Whitnell
Date: 1/27/2023 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte, I’m very my obliged for your warm welcome.

Book: Shattered Sighs