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What Am I

What Am I? I’m a castle in the sky, with window into the human mind, Walls of fabricated fiction, created strictly by design. My words are non-existent, void of all sound, Blurred vision of hallucinations keeps me spellbound. What Am I? I’m a fantasy dream at night and an illusion by day, I’ll keep you on your toes, in the most unusual way. A phantom inventor, full of ingenuity and skill, Enough to craft a picture that might make you shrill. What Am I? I’m a figment of your imagination!!!!!! Written By: Sarita A. Milliner © 1/30/16 Submitted for the poetry contest: Who am I? Or, What am I? Sponsored by: SKAT A

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Date: 2/10/2016 4:31:00 PM
You are my beautiful friend Sarita, with a beautiful name. Your words combed the fibers of my heart, like the moth to the flame with much pride. Congratulations...
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/10/2016 5:15:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words and the congratulations, Pashang!!
Date: 2/10/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you for the reply...
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:53:00 PM
Sarita, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/10/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!!
Date: 2/9/2016 11:32:00 PM
Sarita, Congrats on the who I am taks! Thanks for supporting another PD contest. through SK
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/10/2016 7:02:00 AM
OMG, thanks!
Date: 2/1/2016 8:48:00 AM
Nice write. Enjoyed reading....
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/1/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Propir!
Date: 2/1/2016 8:35:00 AM
Are you clouds??? Whatever you are I enjoyed this piece. This is very artistically expressed. Good luck in the contest.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/1/2016 8:44:00 AM
I am whatever you think I am, Richard! Many thanks for the compliment!!
Date: 1/31/2016 11:54:00 PM
I really loved how you did this, very creative! :)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/1/2016 8:46:00 AM
Glad that you enjoyed it Arthur, thanks!!
Date: 1/31/2016 5:43:00 AM
Beautifully penned..
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/1/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Archana!!

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