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Up slightly past midnight, we finally called it a day as we exchanged goodnight kisses and amorous glances with tired eyes Half-awake early morn', I lay supine on the left side of our king-sized bed I scanned the right up-and-down for her; with my outstretched arms; surprising vacancy! She's gone... unbeknownst to me! I sprang fully awake with two consecutive thoughts... "When, oh when will my main squeeze return?" "She left without saying goodbye?" Then my face meets the mirror, and voila! An unmistakable crimson stamp on my right cheek to remember her by... unbeknownst to me! She did say goodbye, after all. And I miss her so! Submitted for... Strand Choice 9 Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/28/2020 Date written: 01/26/2020

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Date: 1/29/2020 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations Edward! Sad story, well told.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/30/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sam:-)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:17:00 PM
Congrats to you too my friend on your top win!;)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/29/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 1/26/2020 4:18:00 PM
this is just so adorable. Gotta fave it, Edward!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/26/2020 5:05:00 PM
Thank you for loving and faving my poem, Andrea:-)

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