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if I could only hold that sublime moment consummated in flowing joy and completeness the world an oyster of unlimited passion sweet champagne flutes chanting salty caviar a la carte the earth is moving waves come in crescendo the top of the peak wonderfully near as the moon pulls me in and out of reality life giving force fluid and innocent almost immaculate the duvet quivers a pillow retreats and satin shirts rub naked skin just before release while the candle of life flickers in intimate approval and consent the moment pro ante glows in heated emotion and time stands still for a while

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Date: 11/28/2022 6:20:00 AM
Great release. Congratulations!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2022 3:26:00 AM
Thank you and kind wishes, Kai
Date: 11/27/2022 8:28:00 PM
A subtle, delicately nuanced journey you’ve taken us on, Kai. Beautiful! Now that the contest is over, I can mark this as a fav too! Warmest congratulations on your win.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2022 3:31:00 AM
Thank you. I am getting back into writing poetry after quite a long break. It helps me so much to focus on the good things in life. Kind wishes, Kai

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