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Tinsel of Gold

When she wrapped around the tinsel of gold, The bare branches bowed around the Christmas tree, And lo! It was a proud sight to behold With coloured paperchains carefully rolled, The honour was bequeathed at the age of three, When she wrapped around the tinsel of gold Small soft hands dipped in baubles new and old, A jumbled wild glittered decorating spree, And lo! It was a proud sight to behold Each Christmas we watched adornment enfold, Lifting our diligent little working bee, When she wrapped around the tinsel of gold Final touches, un-coordinated, yet bold Animated eyes reflecting sparkle and glee, And lo! It was a proud sight to behold Now that our brightest star has left the fold, Like each tree, we remember what used to be, When she wrapped around the tinsel of gold, And lo! It was a proud sight to behold 24/11/22 Sponsor: Constance La France Write a Christmas poem contest

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Date: 12/7/2022 11:35:00 AM
WJ, this poem is so tender and overflowing with the charm of a child at Christmas. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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W J Clarke
Date: 12/8/2022 3:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Sam. Your comments are very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2022 7:39:00 PM
Very beautiful poem with a love-filled narration.
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W J Clarke
Date: 12/6/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Christuraj. Your comments are very much appreciated
Date: 12/5/2022 1:20:00 AM
WJ, a magical and lovely poem, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem, well done, blessings
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W J Clarke
Date: 12/5/2022 5:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance.

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