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What if these notes didn’t rhyme? would you even take the ...moment? Would you think they weren’t so witty, and like the fool you’d give them ...condolence? Sometimes I just can’t find the word to rhyme with something that I’ve ...listened to. And sometimes when I sit to write, it doesn’t matter if morning or ...evening; I can’t get past this writer’s block and so I sit and stare at my ...watch. Perhaps tomorrow I’ll find my mojo, until then, I’ll be in my ...small room.

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Date: 11/5/2021 10:14:00 AM
Enjoyed this clever piece. Thank you for solving the mystery for me in your comments below. I have learned a new word :)
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:40:00 AM
Too witty and cute Cary! Love it! Linda
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Date: 7/20/2018 4:14:00 PM
Clever idea, Cary. In your life you've shown yourself to be resilient; With this poem you've shown yourself to be ...pretty smart. Cheers!
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Cary Snowden
Date: 7/23/2018 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Mark! -Cary
Date: 6/10/2018 7:21:00 PM
Carey: I did real well filling in the missing word until we came to "mojo". This was a "fun" piece. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 6/10/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for giving it a go, Old Buck! —It may be a bit of a stretch, but a "dojo" is a "hall or space for immersive learning or meditation." I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know. -Cary

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