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The One That Got Away

"I love you" These are the three ripe words that I wanted to whisper in your ears. So, I Fixed a date You came We met We spoke But I couldn't propose: Though tattooed on the tip of my tongue, at my dismay it refrained to flow out. Then, I packed all my feelings and emotions in a box with a love letter clinched to it and laid it on your desk. Looking at the hourglass Counted the time. Zealously anticipating for your arrival But, Unfortunately you were on sick leave. Poor me Carried the box ran and hopped into a taxi. Impatiently sitting, throughout the ride yearning to meet you.. After reaching the destination Carelessly forgetting the box, restlessly I jumped down Rushed to your flat Found your name plate beside the door Pressed on the calling bell Faced your maid With a fine clarification I stepped inside the hall Not finding you Confused I stood. In a while, Got to know that you have been shifted to hospital; Not knowing the address and the exact location I stumbled Place to place.. In search of you With a wrong information. Cash had melted; Looking my wallet I sat on the street gaping at your photo, that..I had stolen from your locker. Hit suddenly an idea.. Thought of calling you But, In a hurry had left my mobile on my table; Recalling your number I went to a telephone Booth I tried and tried and tried.. With many failed attempts I just heard the recorded voice which repeatedly said: "your call is not reachable" My eye lids were twitching prophesying something awful is to happen. The clouds were shadowed by darkness; And I returned back home with a huge sigh; Found my pillow Embraced , Cried my heart out, Lay insomniac, whole night Thinking Of YOU I stay awake Worrying, What might have happened to you..! The next day morning, I found newspaper Headlines said: "Airplane crashed due to turbulence" Strange was to know.. Your name typed too.. under the missing passenger list. Why such a shocking news ?! Why the hell did he board the flight all in sudden with no clue? Myself wriggled On the floor.. Soul paralyzed "Losing him" ~The Untold love~ The one who capriciously got away from me in a very short span of time. 3-7-2020 Second place in the contest. Note:The one that got away poetry Contest. Sponsored by Silent One.

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Date: 7/7/2020 6:45:00 PM
Passionately told, you had me reaching for a tissue to dry my eyes. Love has a deep effect on our body and soul. Well done, my friend, congratulations on your win! Warm regards ~ John
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 3:06:00 PM
Aww John Sir, Such a kind review.:-)Yes,you are true.And sorry for making your eyes wet:'( It's just my imagination ,without my knowledge it ended tragically. I will cherish this wonderful review of yours.:-) Thanks a lot sir. Best wishes for you too.:-) Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
Date: 7/7/2020 3:05:00 PM
This is such a heartbreaking muse but narrated so beautifully Deepa! Glad it is fictional. Congratulations on your win :) Much love!
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 3:02:00 PM
Hi Aditi mam, True it seems heartbreaking.:'( Yes tried to be fictional;-) Thankyou for the generous words of appraisal:-) Best wishes. Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/7/2020 9:53:00 AM
The shortest of times are the most difficult.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hello Sir, Yes you are right. Thanks a lot for constantly motivating me through your wonderful contests:-).I am glad to know my poems triumphs your beautiful heart.:-) Blessed to receive your appreciation.keep inspiring. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
Date: 7/4/2020 2:36:00 PM
Hello Deep, I do think that this is a winner for the contest. He should have never taken the plane. Then he would be around . have a nice day my friend. Much love. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2020 2:12:00 PM
Hello Deepa,You have done well with this poem. It is ht and humid here today. Lovely summer weather. Enjoy yoour day my friend. Much love Darlene
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/5/2020 7:11:00 AM
Hello Darlene mam, Thankyou for the warm wishes :-) Yeah, my imagination appreared to be a tragic ending.:-P Have a great day mam.Much love:-)~Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 9:37:00 PM
A fabulous poem for the contest.
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/4/2020 3:17:00 AM
Hello Caren mam, Thanks a bunch for your appreciation and blessing.:-) I am glad you liked it.:-) Take care.Best wishes.~Deepa.

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