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The Old Car

There once was an old car that was quite spry, It had creaky joints and a sputtering sigh. Its engine would wheeze On the road, with such ease Yet, if I now had such car, I would be pleased Newer models are no match for a car of that batch A real classic- though rusty-'neath the sky!

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Date: 5/7/2024 3:44:00 PM
Ha! My first was a '72 Ford LTD. Rust? Check. Loud? Check. Piece of junk? Check. Was I thrilled just to have a car? Double check
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Marguerite C. Anderson
Date: 5/7/2024 5:36:00 PM
Yes Sirree, I am right there with ya, Tom! My old vehicle served me so dutifully for many years.

Book: Shattered Sighs