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The Full Glass

with the palms closed arrived holding within an invisible empty glass destiny made for me and time passed I saw the glass taking shape of my life that I promised to fill up with joy and bliss as I travel the path God has paved for me and at the end of the day I will pour the ethery gold of fulfillment from the beams of the last rays of setting cold sun in the twilight hours and fill the glass to the brim to keep my p r o m i s e I made to me

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Date: 6/4/2023 9:22:00 AM
Interesting concept! Congratulations.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/5/2023 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sydney for your visit and comment.
Date: 6/4/2023 3:01:00 AM
Great winning design. Great thinking outside the box. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/5/2023 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your encouraging comment.
Date: 6/2/2023 4:26:00 AM
- You have filled the glass wonderfully, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 6/2/2023 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Subimal. I love the concluding line - powerful in its simplicity.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/5/2023 9:18:00 PM
Thank you, Suzette.
Date: 6/2/2023 2:06:00 AM
Subimal, oh how beautiful, I love the shape, well done and congratulations on your win !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/5/2023 9:18:00 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Date: 12/16/2018 12:52:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 6:26:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for the wise reminder. God bless you.
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Date: 12/15/2018 6:32:00 PM
such and uplifting shpae poem Subimal. I'll raise my glass and offer my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Subimal :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/15/2018 3:03:00 PM
I love the spiritual quality of your poem, Subimal, and the presentation is awesome! Congratulations on your win in the shape contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2018 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Subimal , I thank you for entering my contest, " Shapes". Your your drawing of words had feeling and great flow . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/15/2018 12:17:00 PM
- A full glass of lovely words, Subimal :) - Very well done :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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