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I have a memory- of going with father to see fireworks we brought folding chairs and warm blankets it is a magical recollection the neighbours gathered with anticipation it began with whistles and flickers flashes and snaps a continual assault of pretty colors falling clusters of lights moving and dissipating strobes flashes bangs cascading waterfalls glittering trailing projectiles and sometimes quiet glitter father held my hand stars hanging in the night sky and drifting slowly down and then spheres of stars glowing oh it is truly a wonderful memory- _______________________________ June 7, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/The Firework Display Copyright Protected, ID 16-798-185-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Fireworks For Me sponsor, Julia Ward First Place

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Date: 6/18/2016 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win, Constance:) Well deserved:)
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:56:00 AM
Congraulations on your win. You make "simplicity" so simple, well done.
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Date: 6/13/2016 6:04:00 PM
Awesome, Constance. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:08:00 PM
Just beautiful! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:57:00 AM
An excellent poem on fireworks my lovely smiling friend drawn with such vivid colors that loved much and much. My favorite and one of the best. A great congrats on your superb win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:46:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive work helped by judicious layout rushed your poem to the top of the contest. My congratulations, Constance. Julia, x
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:28:00 AM
What a lovely poem and a beautiful memory BW. I love fireworks. Where I work I see two or three displays almost every night.
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:19:00 AM
Hi, Constance! My heartfelt congratulations to you for your Trophy First Place win in the 'fireworks for me' Premiere Contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/9/2016 12:52:00 AM
I LOVE IT, Dearie!!! Bet it wins.
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Date: 6/8/2016 1:09:00 AM
The picture painted by your words excels the beauty of the picture posted:) All the best:)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2016 11:11:00 PM
Jo, oh thanks for that nice comment ~
Date: 6/7/2016 7:32:00 AM
What a great picture this gem depicts, BW, thanks for sharing. Good luck........A.M.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2016 11:12:00 PM
AM, thanks for visiting and the nice comment ~
Date: 6/7/2016 5:14:00 AM
In just your words....I can imagine fireworks in-front of me...wish you luck for your contest participation..
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2016 11:13:00 PM
LG thanks so much for visiting and the nice comment ~

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