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That was Then, and This is Now

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The piece is for the "That was Then, and This is Now" Poetry Contest, hosted by the acclaimed INK Empress. Thank you for your condiseration.

That was Then, and This is Now In the crypt of our loves memory, we danced so free, Our romance, a cursed flame, burned with spectral glow. But secrets, whispers from the damned, you see, Now haunt this desolate heart with bitter, icy woe. Thy deceitful touch, a venomous bite, I now know, That hath passed from then, to now. Thy laughter once, a haunting dirge so sweet, Our dreams of an eternal union, pure and true. But lies now stain the sacred vows we'd greet, And trust, like a shattered vase, lies strewn askew. Thy beloved promises now broken, I avow, That hath passed from then, to now. The poison upon thy lips, the accursed kiss still stings, Each deceitful syllable, a phantom’s scream, tears my soul. In the pit of despair, echoes of love's anthem rings, Now consumed by the lies that devour it whole. Thy pleas for moral absolution, I disallow, That hath passed from then, to now. As the raven of betrayal seeks to amend its weary prey, Thy sharp talons, ripping out my heart's core. Once deemed invincible, our love, now rent in disarray, Drifting further apart, forevermore. No longer shall I heed thy entreaties, in sorrow we shall bow, That hath passed from then, to now. Memories of our cursed love, linger in the mist, I'll forge ahead, embracing the darkness that we sow. For in the ruins of our buried love, lost to a fateful tryst, The price of your betrayal, in blood, I shall bestow. Thus, that hath been us then, and this is I now!

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Date: 5/5/2024 11:51:00 AM
Dear Edward, i really felt the metaphors and creative words woven to express so many emotions in this poem! It is poignant and powerful and hits strong in the most eloquent manner. And this would have been a first place winner if not for the archaic words, altho you did use them so very poetically! I love the rhymes and cadence and the way you’ve started the poem and also ended it is so very touching and evocative! Betrayal , sometimes lingers on, and time cannot erase the scars left from it! What an impeccable write! Thank you for sharing this and also for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/5/2024 3:06:00 PM
Wow!! This is very unexpected. Thank you Empress.
Date: 4/15/2024 1:09:00 AM
The title of the poem made me curious, and glad I read, loved this poem.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/15/2024 11:16:00 AM
I express my deepest gratitude Arthur, for thy time spent perusing my poem and for thy gracious words. May your day be bountiful with pleasures and joys.

Book: Shattered Sighs