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Sustainable Love

Out of the blue, love engulfs you. As Dante's Infernal, it can be eternal. Those youthful puppy smells. Fresh as new love prevails. Ceaseless are all tomorrows. A love new sometimes follows. Combustible heat love at its peak Sustainable love not for the weak With a struggle now and then Only the stubborn diligent win With a love that will never end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/15/2019 12:36:00 PM
Fantastic piece.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/15/2019 10:02:00 PM
I actually didn't notice. If I do notice any I can soupmail you if you like, and please return the favor. xomo
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Michael Craig
Date: 3/15/2019 4:25:00 PM
I wanted to thank you for not pointing out the spelling error. I put peek when it should have been peak. I'm a bad speller really hinders my writing. Very self conscious about it but thank you for the kind words you have written about my work.

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