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04// 28/24

Surreality 

Ninth place in Premiere Contest

Contest by Tom Woody 

At No Moon night on way back to home from movie show, suddenly noticed descent Crescent Moon rising slow. Side by side coming Half Moon with half disc yellow. Next appeared ghostly Gibbous Moon and bright Full Moon to glow. Could this be Reality ! No, it was Surreality. Being extremely scared I rushed to enter my house. Got terrified seeing a Mini cat was chased by Macro mouse. In my yard, a wild jackal was attacked by a gigantic gouse. Instead of being kissed, I was greeted with a slap by my spouse. Could this be Reality ! No, it was Surreality. Being bewildered ran to roof flooded with Four - Moon light. Black widow and octopus were embraced too tight. Above ten feet height four Moons swayed left to right. My wife yelled after me with only intention to fight. Could this be Reality ? No, it was Surreality. Surprised to see sudden Sunrise ! Oh, it was early dawn. But nightmare was not gone even at morn. All around were playing cubs of unicorn. Newly -born, each having hooked single horn. Could this be Reality ? No, It was Surreality.

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Date: 4/29/2024 12:44:00 PM
Dear Anisha, indeed your wonderful imagery and rhymes capture fantastical scenarios with poetic finesse. Congratulations for your win in Tom's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/28/2024 1:05:00 PM
This was really cool Anisha. I like the series of opposite expected events and you wrote this very well. Thx for entering
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/28/2024 1:21:00 PM
PS. My fave line (image) was the macro mouse chasing the mini cat. Sweet karma

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