Sunday Supper

sun climbs big cloud hill ribbon rays ink silhouette vultures feast fresh meat

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/10/2024 7:32:00 AM

I do love vultures, after all, the California Condor is a vulture. Your poem lauds the serenity of a sunny day, and a bird of beauty that glides in flight. A good Haiku.

Karen Jones
Date: 5/10/2024 4:55:00 PM

Aw thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2024 4:05:00 PM

Love your imagery here

Karen Jones
Date: 5/3/2024 6:56:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/2/2024 8:20:00 PM

Hmm. Guess those 'vultures' skipped the morning sermon on pacifism, eh?! lol.

Karen Jones
Date: 5/3/2024 3:09:00 AM

lol I am sure they did! Thanks for reading dear friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/28/2024 5:18:00 PM

I witnessed that same thing yesterday morning...kind of creepy to see them swoop down and snatch up the carrion!

Karen Jones
Date: 4/28/2024 6:41:00 PM

Nature is brutal isn't it? Thanks for reading Sara!