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mother flower sways dispersing seeds in the air her children leave home dormant in their sleep tomorrows generation awaits suns warm kiss 16.09.21

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Date: 9/18/2021 5:30:00 AM
Love the imagery Emilia, well written haiku. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom. Think I am understanding them a bit better now. Emilia : )
Date: 9/16/2021 4:16:00 PM
Nice. The first one's a heavyweight contest contender.
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Date: 9/17/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thank you Chris, I keep trying to improve with this form. Emilia : )

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