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Summer Storm

Morn’s beacon beholds the land In the chagrin’s lonely hand; Gray day is hard to withstand. Until the clouds let it rain; Evidently bringing pain. Let the human’s aid remain.

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Date: 4/19/2022 12:13:00 AM
Very well penned, great rhyming that suits the subject in hand. Regards David in NZ. Sorry it has been quite a while since I last commented on any of your work.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/20/2022 4:02:00 AM
Thanks, sir David. It’s good to hear from you again. Keep safe and have a great day.

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