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Still Alive

alive it's worth more than it's (w)hole and less than (a) (a)part darkness borne of death (a) (a)li(v)e that's been told as if one more day were so old flightless with fight left to the night to break or to not to fear or to not a mere bend with the wind to late to abscond nor rescind undressed in interpretation undue distress of trepidation filled or fulfilled with failed reputation of naught so it begins on and on breath being about to be(e) the sting of life feeling free I am but what I am set out to be or not blustery or besmirched begotten but not forgotten I will the will to live (w)holey alive

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Date: 5/2/2021 1:56:00 PM
some are fighting the good fight and some are on the dark path. still the heart beats on, the will to survive. lies with history not mine.
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:03:00 PM
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Date: 5/2/2021 12:33:00 PM
Hello Tim. Your last stanza pretty much sums it up. doesn't get much plainer than that. Hoping all is well with you and yours. It is a rainy day here. I hope you can see the sun:)
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Date: 5/2/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hello TS Poetry, yes you are still alive. Enjoy your da ymy friend.
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