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Soul Settled In the Saviour

Slip, my soul, as sunset into the sea --- settled to stay serenely shining shaded by the Saviour’s starlight shielded against stain of sin-sting sorrow scintillating spiritedly. Seeking succor from sufferings and strife soul of mine, slip as sunset into the sea --- surrounded with Sovereign solitude secured midst salvation’s surety subdued from stubborn self-centeredness. Sweetly savouring satisfaction of sincere service sufficed by the Supreme Shepherd* sealed soul, slip steadfastly, as sunset into the sea --- silenced against slothfulness-shouts with sleep’s solace safely sheltered toward tomorrow’s steadfast stewardship.
*Psalm 23:1 The LORD is my shepherd; I shall not want. Psalm 23:3 He restoreth my soul: he leadeth me in the paths of righteousness for his name's sake. April 23, 2020 1st place, "Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems)" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A; judged on 5/14/2024. 1st place, "Slipping Soul Sunsets into the Sea" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 4/28/2020.

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Date: 8/26/2020 11:49:00 AM
Just read this. Congratulations on your win. I love the 23 Psalm, it is so very beautiful. Here, you have a wonderful write/poem. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:18:00 AM
Beata, lovely poem and a great example for your contest, hopefully I can write a poem in alliteration worthy and congratulations on your win also _Constance
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Date: 8/26/2020 1:15:00 AM
A beautiful poem depicting your deep relationship with our Saviour, Beata:) congrats on your win too:)
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Date: 4/28/2020 1:42:00 PM
Congrats Beata on this alliterative offering, simply stupendous!
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your won on this perfect alteration peace.
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Date: 4/27/2020 3:37:00 PM
Congrats, well written and inspired.
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Date: 4/26/2020 2:24:00 PM
How lovely Beata. It is so deserving of your First Placement! Congratulations my friend. xxoo
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Date: 4/24/2020 9:35:00 PM
O Beata, you adore our Psalm 23 (not for funerals but for the living testimonies!) You are quite a Poet, and how wonderfully alliterative are Saviour, Spirit, Surrender, Salvation, Self-Denial, Shepherd, Sacrifice, Soul, SEALED SERENity .... amen and THANK you. Poetess. Shalom shalom in Christ Jesus (Yashua), PTL.
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Date: 4/24/2020 3:38:00 PM
Super write Beata, love how all the S words start and finish each line, truly unique! So uplifting and inspiring too!
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Date: 4/23/2020 9:27:00 PM
Such a joy to read and so impressive with your writing skills. God has given you a precious gift with words. God bless you my sweet friend. I appreciate everything you write and comments too. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 4/23/2020 6:59:00 AM
Beautiful from the start! A wonderful and lyrical write about our Lord!
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