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Sonnet to the eels

Those tender eels you rescue by the shore bring you empty news from the deep; they aptly sing your sunken score, vivid sounds from the liver of your ship. You rely on your Sunday best to warm your sins, fins and skin, but the heart... the heart is scattered like the swarm of pebbles that tear your feet apart. Far, you glance at the fading distance, which, in turn, presents itself at hand, making itself unavailable in existence. A darkest seagull hovers by, so stealth, and you face the everchanging sand, and you learn to woo burials, death.

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Date: 5/14/2024 6:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Onofre da Ramalha
Date: 5/15/2024 12:18:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 5/12/2024 2:17:00 PM
… like the swarm of pebbles that tear your feet apart…Good poem with unique lines!
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Onofre da Ramalha
Date: 5/13/2024 3:15:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 5/12/2024 1:00:00 PM
A deep and emotive sonnet..
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Onofre da Ramalha
Date: 5/13/2024 3:15:00 AM
very kind of you
Date: 5/12/2024 10:49:00 AM
wow. i am amazed by this. i absolutely loved this - the writing style, the hidden meanings - everything was flowy yet blunt in an eye catching way. kudos. kudos. kudos. Your instant fan, Hiba.
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Onofre da Ramalha
Date: 5/13/2024 3:15:00 AM
very kind of you

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