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Silent Is the Spring

Silent is the Spring Silent is the birdsong In the early morning Spring Lonely are the daffodils And the sunshine that you bring Abandoned is the heart That you nurtured through the Fall Winter now encased Forever frozen in a wall. Joyless are the nights No requests to dream sweet Searing are the memories Silhouettes upon the sheet Arid is the sunken soil No more roses left to bloom Withered petals blowing In the wind of silent doom. What was once a pleasant landscape Decays in emotional drought Time an ongoing enemy Leaving nothing but increased doubt Salted streams try wash away The torture now so violent Never has one lived through such A Spring so painfully silent. April 9th 2019

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Date: 1/5/2020 3:35:00 PM
Another great poem! Wonderful write!!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/7/2020 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Krish!
Date: 11/20/2019 3:19:00 PM
wow, I just love your poetry. This is so good. The meter and the rhymes are so fluent and smooth. Nicely done.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/20/2019 3:35:00 PM
That is such a compliment coming from a talent like yourself. Thank you, Chris.
Date: 11/13/2019 9:46:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Midnight.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/20/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/3/2019 3:22:00 PM
There is a lot of beauty in silence... But also pain...it is a double edged sword...
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/3/2019 5:29:00 PM
Sometimes...and sometimes it's just cruel. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 10/31/2019 9:11:00 AM
So beautifully sad, yet elegantly expressed, Midnight Aurora. GrEaT lines throughout ... Arid is the sunken soil. No more roses left to bloom. Withered petals blowing In the wind of silent doom. So much emotional imagery. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/3/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thanks Freddie.
Date: 10/27/2019 10:38:00 AM
Abandoned and forsaken in spring, the time of renewal, it often makes the sadness more papable. The last stanza seemingly alluding to physical abuse, sad. Your write has given voice to the silence.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/27/2019 4:26:00 PM
Thanks very much James.
Date: 10/22/2019 12:44:00 PM
Another beautiful powerful piece:-) x
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/24/2019 4:45:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:32:00 PM
The rhythm has a light airy feel but the content is steeped in darkness. I like the odd way it seems to work.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 5:58:00 PM
Life is full of contradictions :)
Date: 10/10/2019 12:28:00 PM
Hello Midnight Aurora, this is a beautiful poem created for Spring. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day my friend.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 10/10/2019 6:13:00 AM
So sad... Spring is always such a joyful experience for me this seemed "sad"... just like you said... "silent"... Blessings for you always, Gina
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Gina.
Date: 10/10/2019 2:52:00 AM
Hi Aurora, loved this piece in which you visualize spring like the slumbering silent giant that it is.well done. Blessings Carl
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Carl.
Date: 4/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
Very nicely done Aurora
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Allen.
Date: 4/27/2019 7:38:00 AM
Nicely done, Aurora, great visuals as well as audio, the sounds of spring, which bring into view the emotional. Excellent.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Phil.
Date: 4/26/2019 3:37:00 AM
Hi, what a great poetry you wrote...! I felt all sensation of that silent spring... Good poetry, salute, alkas.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 10:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alkas Poetry.

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