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you're so far away... tantalizing temptation was always your forte teasing me, drawing me in making me yearn for your passionate kiss desperate to be lured into your amorous arms by those luscious lavender lips and the sweet scent of your sultry sensuality alas, my love... this cruel chasm created by your passing has left me melancholic how I remember our romantic rendezvous and savor the memories of our marital mergings bodies entwined in erotic embrace  reaching heights of euphoric ecstasy that left us spent and satisfied, time and again tell me where I can find you... sun and moon are distant lovers, languishing in an uncaring universe determined to keep them from consummating their vows even still, every eighteen months or so they meet at the appointed time a galactic eclipse where two become one the cosmos cries out in joyous refrain wait for me, my beloved... and tho' sun and moon may fade away into an eternal ether of nothingness my love for you, dear one, shall never wither and die for ours is a lasting love, destined to deliver this bereaved soul from the bane of loneliness and loss on that great day when our two hearts reunite in rapturous, rhythmic rhapsody - forever a day for a year, a day for a year...

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Date: 6/3/2024 6:53:00 AM
A nice poem and it shows the sadness and loneliness of loss combined with the hope of eternal love.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/4/2024 1:21:00 PM
Yessir and thx
Date: 6/2/2024 1:40:00 PM
a day for a year, a day for a year... one that will last forever in your heart and the one you love, so well written Tom, you know your romance !
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/2/2024 3:23:00 PM
Thx Rosie
Date: 6/1/2024 2:56:00 AM
Wonderful romantic lines. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/1/2024 5:14:00 AM
Yes ma'am
Date: 5/31/2024 4:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this again. Such passionate longing in the lines. Well done.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/31/2024 5:01:00 PM
Sorry I've been a bit distracted lately haven't posted anything new but greatly appreciate your revisit
Date: 5/31/2024 10:20:00 AM
Masterfully expressed, as I would expect from your golden pen.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/31/2024 5:01:00 PM
This one felt pretty good. Thx Rick
Date: 5/30/2024 7:35:00 AM
Dear Tom, your tantalizing alliterations wrap around the theme of lost love in a poignant embrace. An undying love, a passionate plea from a bereaved soul, a cosmic backdrop, a sensuous reverie.. such a revel in romance! A fantastic piece of emotive and artistic alliteration. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. Suze
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/30/2024 1:09:00 PM
Aw! I’m honored, humbled and truly moved by your kind generosity. So many great poets here, and you’re one of them, Tom. I hold your poetic talent in very high esteem. Your storytelling is always so beautifully expressed, and always, your poems are stories to savor.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/30/2024 12:41:00 PM
Thx Suze. Coming from one of the best, if not the best poet on PS I'm humbled. I don't have the vocab of some. I'm jus a simple storyteller in the end
Date: 5/30/2024 5:13:00 AM
Passionate emotions and the longing for that magical moment when, in the guise of a solar eclipse, two hearts unite to renew their love...till one day it becomes a 'forever' reality. // paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/30/2024 5:18:00 AM
Hey Paul good to see you in my space. Yes, may romance never die
Date: 5/28/2024 5:59:00 PM
A poem filled with passion and romanticism. Elegantly displayed. Well done. And thank you for commnting on my poem, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/28/2024 6:10:00 PM
Yes ma'am and thank you
Date: 5/22/2024 5:30:00 PM
Tom, this is a pleasure to read and romantic indeed. It's wonderful to think that love can last. That would be a wonderful thing.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/22/2024 5:43:00 PM
Eternal love? We may have to pass a few tests to get there but sure, why not?
Date: 5/22/2024 6:36:00 AM
I love love poems. A great write Tommy. Reunite in rapturous, rhythmic rhapsody -forever. Astounding.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/22/2024 6:41:00 AM
Good to see you back Tonye. I was worried a bit
Date: 5/20/2024 9:23:00 PM
An incredibly lovely poem, Tom. So romantic. I love the final verse. Great writing!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/21/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thx for stopping by Evelyn
Date: 5/20/2024 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful, how wonderful and fortunate to have loved and been loved. Dave.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/20/2024 5:45:00 PM
The best doggone thing in the material universe. Thx
Date: 5/20/2024 3:11:00 AM
The poignant mix of wistfulness and eager longing for a future reunion offers a beautiful reflection on the enduring power of love against the awe-inspiring backdrop of cosmic force between the Sun and Moon. From the Haiburn Master to romantic alliteration, your versatility as a writer is amazing, Tommy. Really well done...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/20/2024 4:39:00 AM
Trying to be as eclectic as possible. Thx Maria
Date: 5/18/2024 10:04:00 AM
Ties that bind. Beautiful memories, Tom, and exquisitely rendered here.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/18/2024 10:08:00 AM
Yes they do and thx for stopping by
Date: 5/17/2024 3:40:00 PM
This is a true poet’s grand and romantic verse. Very lovely and sensuous..a rapturous ecstasy of emotions! :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/17/2024 4:28:00 PM
Dear Laura, thought you forgot about ol' Tommy boy. Thx much
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2024 3:41:00 PM
Also, a fave! :)
Date: 5/17/2024 5:54:00 AM
I had a transatlantic rendezvous once. Does that count?
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/17/2024 9:02:00 AM
Depends. Was it in Transylvania, cuz...
Date: 5/17/2024 1:04:00 AM
Hi Tom , quite a beautiful tribute , eternal love is the greatest of all loves , beautifully penned . Danny
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/4/2024 1:21:00 PM
Hey Daniel, did you accidentally turn of comments on your poems?
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/17/2024 5:33:00 AM
Hope rules! Thx much
Date: 5/16/2024 11:12:00 PM
Nice poem! I love the alliteration esp. Mo
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/17/2024 5:33:00 AM
Good to see you Mo
Date: 5/16/2024 8:49:00 PM
This is one of the best examples of a romantic poem. Every word and every line breathes passion in its great intensity. Love the whole poem especially the third stanza- "sun and moon are distant lovers, languishing in an uncaring universe determined to keep them from consummating their vows even still, every eighteen months or so they meet at the appointed time a galactic eclipse where two become one the cosmos cries out in joyous refrain" So love can consummate one day whatever be the time gap and hindrances be. Tom, this goes into my FAVE.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/17/2024 5:32:00 AM
Wow thx Valsa
Date: 5/16/2024 8:56:00 AM
This is simply awe inspiring, Tom, goes into my faves:)
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/16/2024 2:35:00 PM
Extra kewl thx
Date: 5/15/2024 12:57:00 PM
Very intriguing romance! Your use of alliteration is seamless and unforced. It flows beautifully. Steamy, sensual, sexy, sentimental, and sanctified by marriage, this romance is wholesome and refreshing. Xoxo
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 2:19:00 PM
Ha! You caught the marriage reference. Very nice. And great alliterative comment. You should enter the contest
Date: 5/15/2024 8:51:00 AM
Love floats in romance and passion. Romantic Passionate lovers are Sun and Moon.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 9:32:00 AM
Indeed. Thx Nish
Date: 5/14/2024 10:35:00 PM
Ooh la la! So romantic and I always like the symbolism of moon and sun as lovers.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 5:17:00 AM
Ooh la la indeed mademoiselle
Date: 5/14/2024 8:09:00 AM
So pasionate. I like "the sun and moon are distant lovers."
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/14/2024 9:01:00 AM
Hey thx Mike
Date: 5/13/2024 7:54:00 PM
This is too good ...so romantic...A strong influence for us to ener your contest
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/14/2024 5:02:00 AM
Much thx Deb
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