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Cuckoos hushed, rambling vines and plight. Hordes of birch, beech, pine, spruce and oak. Choke of darkness, forcing midnight. Wax and breadcrumbs children-ditched folks. Hordes of birch, beech, pine, spruce and oak. Hansel and Gretel, frightened, twitch Wax and breadcrumbs. Children-ditched folks - Woodcutter built house for a witch. Hansel and Gretel, frightened twitch Of laced-up fingers spot the Woodcutter-built-house for a witch. Tasty-sweet, they eat what they see. Of laced-up fingers, spot the Craving, clinging to witch’s house. Tasty-sweet, they eat what they see. An hungry old woman they rouse. Craving, clinging to witch’s house, Sticky-mess invited in by An hungry old woman. They rouse Her wrinkles and warts. The bat lies. Sticky-mess invited in by Deception. It’s not a love-in. Her wrinkles and warts - The bat lies In wait to bake in the oven. Deception. It’s not a love-in Handing the pan, asking succour. Why wait to bake in the oven?! Tries to fool girl. Wants to bake her. Handing the pan, asking succour. In 1940’s, the earthface fell pale. Tries to fool girl. Wants to bake her. Grimm’s prophecy no fairytale. In 1940’s, the earthface fell pale, Choke of darkness, forcing midnight. Grimm’s prophecy no fairytale. Cuckoos hushed, rambling vines and plight. 1/23/2021 Proud Pantoum Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/6/2021 1:22:00 PM
Well delivered, Kim, the morph between truth and tale, chilling . . . : (
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:55:00 PM
Crazy, right?! Perhaps prophecy looms in strange places!
Date: 2/1/2021 7:27:00 AM
A sad chapter. You did this well. “Lest we forget.” Congrats on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:55:00 PM
Truly! Thank you, Richard!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:51:00 PM
Truly! Thank you, Richard!
Date: 1/28/2021 5:40:00 PM
Kim, a chilling depiction of the 1940's ovens of Auschwitz, etc., stitched carefully into the tapestry of a Grimm fairy tale. Amazing writing, my friend, well worthy of your POTD this week. You inspire!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, John! A great compliment...
Date: 1/28/2021 12:18:00 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on POTD - truly deserved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 1/26/2021 8:23:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on POTD _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 1/26/2021 1:58:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD :) God bless you always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! God bless you too!
Date: 1/25/2021 9:47:00 PM
Wow! So enjoyable to read this! Congrats on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/25/2021 8:14:00 PM
I like this very much. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day honors. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/25/2021 7:48:00 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 1/25/2021 2:26:00 PM
Powerful POTD of prophecy Kim on so many metaphoric levels. Congratulations on your honor and best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:40:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/25/2021 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations Kim, This is quite a piece! Excellent !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 1/25/2021 12:51:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 1/25/2021 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this magnificent poem, dearest Caren! A well-deserved honor of POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you! ...Kim
Date: 1/25/2021 11:41:00 AM
"Child abandonment, attempted cannibalism, enslavement, and murder" Over the years, it is difficult to look at Nursery Rhymes and Fairy-tales the same way. Singing "Rock a bye baby" Knowing that a baby will fall out of the tree. I have chills all over. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the day. ~ Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:42:00 PM
I used to end rock-a-bye baby by saying, “right in my arms”
Date: 1/25/2021 11:18:00 AM
- Wow ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... impressive, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/25/2021 10:51:00 AM
Every new generation needs to be taught about the horrors that transpired so it will never happen again. Your poem is amazing and very worthy of your POTD honor Kim. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 1/25/2021 9:59:00 AM
Excellent pantoum, Kim:-) Heartiest congratulations on your POTD recognition!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 1/25/2021 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with great imagery ,Kim. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 1/25/2021 9:17:00 AM
Back with congrats on POTD, Kim. May you have many more as well. Happy Monday, ~gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Happy Monday (Eve)!
Date: 1/25/2021 8:05:00 AM
Incredibly well done. Rich imagery. Thanks! Congrats on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Milton!
Date: 1/25/2021 8:01:00 AM
Kim congrats on your POTD with this great Pantoum. Hugs ~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Anitha!
Date: 1/25/2021 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative write. History is always with us. Enjoy your win/day/week with blessings.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you! Enjoy all as well!
Date: 1/25/2021 6:55:00 AM
You amaze me...creativity galore...Congratulations Kim Rodrigues on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 1/25/2021 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/25/2021 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations Kim, horrible subject, great work...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
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